Storyboard Animatic

This is the animation of my storyboard that I created using Windows Movie Maker.

This is the feedback that I received for my animatic:

Could do with a little more variety of shots and shots of different settings. Could focus less on the guy singing and the guitar.

1/10/2012 9:04 AM

Great locational shots if you can get the real life ones.. be sure to focus on the singing and his head as he sings, include as much depth of field as possible, it will really help add to the mood. An idea may be to have some moving shots along the guitar as opposed to just stills and zooms.

1/10/2012 9:03 AM

- good and appropriate choice of location - perhaps have more shots of the singer without the guitar to give more meaning to the song (e.g. walking along the beach) - good variety of shots used

1/10/2012 9:03 AM

possibly more locations

1/10/2012 9:03 AM

more close ups of the singer when he isn't singing. when he's looking out to sea etc.

1/10/2012 9:02 AM

great idea. maybe try a few different shots, but don't make them to quick as it will not go with the genre.

1/10/2012 9:02 AM

Good stuff, try a few different shots and a little faster edits. Like the close up shot of the man.

1/10/2012 9:02 AM

- maybe another change of location to add variety - good focused shots on the guitar

1/10/2012 9:02 AM

The scenery of the shots matches well with the music choice. But maybe some different shots of scenery as well would be good.

1/10/2012 9:02 AM

Really good... maybe more shots of the surrounding location.

1/10/2012 9:02 AM

Nothing to add really . maybe like a shot of him singing and walking on the beach or through town?

1/10/2012 9:02 AM